The feedback I received from round two of this assignment was very positive. Therefore, I did not change very much. I tried to keep it as similar to the previous video as possible while polishing it up slightly. Here is the video. I hope you enjoy.
Hey Ryan, you did a great job, probably one of the best I’ve seen. You spoke loudly and clearly, you were a bit dynamic which is good and your product is something a lot of people would buy including myself. I also like how you organized the pitch, speaking about three specific aspects of your product. All I have to say is good job! Check out my post: http://jamalbrown4.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey Ryan, you did a great job, probably one of the best I’ve seen. You spoke loudly and clearly, you were a bit dynamic which is good and your product is something a lot of people would buy including myself. I also like how you organized the pitch, speaking about three specific aspects of your product. All I have to say is good job! Check out my post:
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